Personal Naritive
Veronica Jimenez
Ms. Gilmore
11 English 6th hour
24 October 2012
Cedar Point
It all started on a bright early July morning it was around 7 or so in the morning I was ready to leave for Cedar Point. My uncle came to pick me up and we were off, but we first stopped at the gas station to get some gas and we got hot chocolate it was very good! There were 7 kids and 4 adults. It was my cousins Gustavo, Melissa, Lesley, Carlos, Aden, their friend Buba (I think his real name is David but I'm not sure since they all called him Buba) my two aunts and two uncles and me. I remember that Lesley woke us up because she had seen a hotel that had a big yellow slide and she was excited there was like 10 minutes left anyways before we reached Cedar Point.
When we got there Gustavo and Carlos were making fun of Buba because he told them that he had a crush on Melissa which I thought it was funny and cute because we were all young I was about 14, Gustavo was 14 as well, I believe that Carlos and Buba were 12, Melissa was 13, Lesley was about 7 and Aden was 3. I was kind of excited because I thought I was cool because we were able to go by ourselves around the park. As soon as we got inside the park we got in line to get on the Mantis I was excited to ride the Mantis and Gustavo was scared because he had never ridden a roller-coaster before. We took a couple of pictures while we were in line because the line was pretty long so we were trying to make the time go by fast. Next we went on a train ride which was pretty cool it gave you a tour around the park and lake which I thought it was neat!
My uncle called us to meet him at the lake en
Ms. Gilmore
11 English 6th hour
24 October 2012
Cedar Point
It all started on a bright early July morning it was around 7 or so in the morning I was ready to leave for Cedar Point. My uncle came to pick me up and we were off, but we first stopped at the gas station to get some gas and we got hot chocolate it was very good! There were 7 kids and 4 adults. It was my cousins Gustavo, Melissa, Lesley, Carlos, Aden, their friend Buba (I think his real name is David but I'm not sure since they all called him Buba) my two aunts and two uncles and me. I remember that Lesley woke us up because she had seen a hotel that had a big yellow slide and she was excited there was like 10 minutes left anyways before we reached Cedar Point.
When we got there Gustavo and Carlos were making fun of Buba because he told them that he had a crush on Melissa which I thought it was funny and cute because we were all young I was about 14, Gustavo was 14 as well, I believe that Carlos and Buba were 12, Melissa was 13, Lesley was about 7 and Aden was 3. I was kind of excited because I thought I was cool because we were able to go by ourselves around the park. As soon as we got inside the park we got in line to get on the Mantis I was excited to ride the Mantis and Gustavo was scared because he had never ridden a roller-coaster before. We took a couple of pictures while we were in line because the line was pretty long so we were trying to make the time go by fast. Next we went on a train ride which was pretty cool it gave you a tour around the park and lake which I thought it was neat!
My uncle called us to meet him at the lake en